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Octagon Poetry Collective: an open mic night

Ōtepoti-Dunedin is a UNESCO City of Literature. I feel fortunate to live here and the city inspires me constantly.

As a member of the Octagon Poetry Collective, I am honoured to take part in, occasionally MC, and always attend our Poetry Reading and Open Mic nights. These occur once a month from February to November each year. Currently we are graciously hosted on the second-to-last Wednesday of the month at Dog With Two Tails.

It’s easy to get a feel for what a poetry night with an open mic is like if you’ve not been.

During a recent evening [and as I do at basically every sesh] I took notes about most of the open mic people who graced the stage, and have since arranged these notes into a poem. Here it is:

OPEN MIC SEPTEMBER  DUNEDIN
           
An elder said hai uku
            “Sorry, I don’t write hai ukus”
He leaned in to see his own words in the dimness
Perched on the edge of the stage
Lenses fair perched on his non-pinced nez
 
The old world is dying
The new world is struggling to be born
Kyra’s voice cracks a little and she flows quick
There’s not much time she’s right get it fast
 
The wizened mouth of Brosnan
He wants us to hear him but
He can’t bear to be
Loud
 
A story of a man’s love
Misplaced in a watch
Polished while his family frayed
And ate Mexican food
 
Alison introduced in a thunderous
Solo applause
She talks of Judith
She exhales deeply in perfumed airs
 
“Rae gave all her energy
To her brats”
A classic mullet tells a tale
A true mate, alright…oh good old Rae
 
Angela, sweet Angela
She exudes love and familial care
I am there with her and daffodils laid
Great great whakapapa weavers there
 
Maddy has a nametag
She speaks of a soul
And soles for escaping
A man’s life
 
A muso braves a poets’
Open mic a capella
George St inspires
Octagonal thoughts
 
Ngaio presents a circle
Of anxiety
Circles of sound clasped
Around her neck.
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